Writing Assignments 5 : Letter of Complaint

The next assignments is about letter of complaint. I decide to choose the situation (e), in there, I want to complain about council plan to chop down all the trees. Check it out


                                                                                                            2481 Marconi St
                                                                                      Tshiawelo 1818

                                                                                      25th March

The Council of Tshiawelo,

Municipal Building,

Tshiawelo

Dear Sir/Madam,

   I am writing to complain about the Council's plans to chop down all the trees at Marconi Street that being discussed recently.

   In my humble opinion, that plans are so ridiculous and seems that it is not considered before.

   First, you know that Africa is so hot and you want to chop down the trees that give us oxygen? I can't imagine that there will be more and more hot.

   Second, when the whole world is being seriously fight the global warming, why do we do the opposite things?

   That's all that I want to say, please wisely consider again this plans.

   I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Bhayu N

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         2481 Marconi St
                                                                                      Tshiawelo 1818

                                                                                      25th March

The Council of Tshiawelo,

Municipal Building,

Tshiawelo

Dear Sir/Madam,

   I am writing to complain about the Council's plans to chop down all the trees at Marconi Street that being discussed recently.

   In my humble opinion, that plans are so ridiculous and seems that it is not considered before.

   First, you know that Africa is so hot and you want to chop down the trees that give us oxygen? I can't imagine that there will be much hotter.

   Second, when the whole world is being seriously fight the global warming, why do we do the opposite things?

   That's all that I want to say, please wisely consider again this plans.

   I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Bhayu N

That's all. Waiting for any comments :3