Writing Assignments 5 : Letter of Complaint

The next assignments is about letter of complaint. I decide to choose the situation (e), in there, I want to complain about council plan to chop down all the trees. Check it out


                                                                                                            2481 Marconi St
                                                                                      Tshiawelo 1818

                                                                                      25th March

The Council of Tshiawelo,

Municipal Building,

Tshiawelo

Dear Sir/Madam,

   I am writing to complain about the Council's plans to chop down all the trees at Marconi Street that being discussed recently.

   In my humble opinion, that plans are so ridiculous and seems that it is not considered before.

   First, you know that Africa is so hot and you want to chop down the trees that give us oxygen? I can't imagine that there will be more and more hot.

   Second, when the whole world is being seriously fight the global warming, why do we do the opposite things?

   That's all that I want to say, please wisely consider again this plans.

   I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Bhayu N

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         2481 Marconi St
                                                                                      Tshiawelo 1818

                                                                                      25th March

The Council of Tshiawelo,

Municipal Building,

Tshiawelo

Dear Sir/Madam,

   I am writing to complain about the Council's plans to chop down all the trees at Marconi Street that being discussed recently.

   In my humble opinion, that plans are so ridiculous and seems that it is not considered before.

   First, you know that Africa is so hot and you want to chop down the trees that give us oxygen? I can't imagine that there will be much hotter.

   Second, when the whole world is being seriously fight the global warming, why do we do the opposite things?

   That's all that I want to say, please wisely consider again this plans.

   I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Bhayu N

That's all. Waiting for any comments :3

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Writing Assignments 4 : Letter of Inquiry

In this assignment, we're used to make a letter of inquiry. I pretend to be a chief scout, who have to look for a camp in  the end of the year. Here it is


1866 Wilmar Farm Road
Chantilly, MD 20151
March 20, 2016

1712 High Meadow Lane
Moosic, PA 18507

Attention:

   Wilmar High School is planning a camp in Memorial Camp in the end of this year. We have made a plan about the activity of our camp, and I think Memorial Camp is good enough for us. It contain hiking, out bond,  campfire, and tracking. Our group, include the scout team are about  150 people. Could you send us some brochures so to help our planning?

1. How long is the route of hiking from the camp to the Moosic mountain?
2. Is there any good events near the end of the year? Except Christmas and New Year Eve.
3. What are good places that we can visit there? Could you give us some suggestions?
4. What are the suitable accommodations for kind group of us?

  As we are group of students, could we ask you a favour? If there is any other school that have a plan to camp in the near time of us, could you give us their contact so we could re-arrange the schedule and we could meet there at the camp. Camping together would be great!

  We would appreciate any information provided. Thanks for the time and assistance.

Sincerely,


Bhayu N

Bhayu N


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1866 Wilmar Farm Road
Chantilly, MD 20151
March 20, 2016

1712 High Meadow Lane
Moosic, PA 18507

Attention: Mr. Jamie V
               Manager
               Memorial Camp

   Wilmar High School is planning a camp in Memorial Camp in the end of this year. We have made a plan about the activity of our camp, and I think Memorial Camp is good enough for us. It contain hiking, out bond,  campfire, and tracking. Our group, include the scout team are about  150 people. Could you send us some brochures so to help our planning?

1. How long is the route of hiking from the camp to the Moosic mountain?
2. Are there any good events near the end of the year? Except Christmas and New Year Eve.
3. What are good places that we can visit there? Could you give us some suggestions?
4. What are the suitable accommodations for kind group of us?

  As we are group of students, could we ask you a favour? If there is any other school that have a plan to camp in the near time of us, could you give us their contact so we could re-arrange the schedule and we could meet there at the camp. Camping together would be great!

  We would appreciate any information provided. Thanks for the time and assistance.

Sincerely,


Bhayu N


Bhayu N

That's all. Waiting for any suggestion :3 

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Writing Assignments 3 : Notes

Ok now i'll post some notes that based on certain situation.

1. Exercise 7. I choose situation b



And this is the notes


2. Exercise 9. I choose situation b and g


here is the notes
9 b
 

9 g


3. For the last is Exercise 10. I'm used to make my own situation, so I pretend to go out to pickup my daddy. Here is the note that i made for my mom.



That's all. Any feedback welcomed!

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Writing Assignment 2 : Business Email

The second task is about writing an email to another company. Take a look at the screenshot  ;-)

Waiting for your feedback guys!

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Writing Assignment 1 : Reply to Business Letter

Here's my work on the first assignment in this very semester of writing class. It's about business letter.

                                                                                                                Rochester
RC57JY
United Kingdom

Dave Kloren
Karelstraat 137
1051 Amsterdam
Netherlands

Ref  :

September, 18th 2015

Dear Mr. Dave,

It is a great honor for us to accept this award. Thanks for the trust and opportunity that have given to us to become the winner.

I am sure that your help will really helpful for us, and we will waiting for your further information.

Thanks for your invitation. We will surely attend the ceremony. Just one thing, how about the accommodation? Will your company take care of it for us?

Once again, thanks for the award. It is a great honor.

I look forward to seeing you in the ceremony.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Ingram
Team Leader

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That's all, thanks. Any suggestion will really needed to improve my skills ^^

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