Writing Assignment 1 : Reply to Business Letter

Here's my work on the first assignment in this very semester of writing class. It's about business letter.

                                                                                                                Rochester
RC57JY
United Kingdom

Dave Kloren
Karelstraat 137
1051 Amsterdam
Netherlands

Ref  :

September, 18th 2015

Dear Mr. Dave,

It is a great honor for us to accept this award. Thanks for the trust and opportunity that have given to us to become the winner.

I am sure that your help will really helpful for us, and we will waiting for your further information.

Thanks for your invitation. We will surely attend the ceremony. Just one thing, how about the accommodation? Will your company take care of it for us?

Once again, thanks for the award. It is a great honor.

I look forward to seeing you in the ceremony.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Ingram
Team Leader

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That's all, thanks. Any suggestion will really needed to improve my skills ^^