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Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Writing Assignments 4 : Letter of Inquiry

Author: Category: 8:42 PM
In this assignment, we're used to make a letter of inquiry. I pretend to be a chief scout, who have to look for a camp in  the end of the year. Here it is


1866 Wilmar Farm Road
Chantilly, MD 20151
March 20, 2016

1712 High Meadow Lane
Moosic, PA 18507

 Attention:

    Wilmar High School is planning a camp in Memorial Camp in the end of this year. We have made a plan about the activity of our camp, and I think Memorial Camp is good enough for us. It contain hiking, out bond,  campfire, and tracking. Our group, include the scout team are about  150 people. Could you send us some brochures so to help our planning?

 1. How long is the route of hiking from the camp to the Moosic mountain?
2. Is there any good events near the end of the year? Except Christmas and New Year Eve.
3. What are good places that we can visit there? Could you give us some suggestions?
4. What are the suitable accommodations for kind group of us?

   As we are group of students, could we ask you a favour? If there is any other school that have a plan to camp in the near time of us, could you give us their contact so we could re-arrange the schedule and we could meet there at the camp. Camping together would be great!

   We would appreciate any information provided. Thanks for the time and assistance.

 Sincerely,
Bhayu N

 Bhayu N
----EDIT----
1866 Wilmar Farm Road
Chantilly, MD 20151
March 20, 2016

1712 High Meadow Lane
Moosic, PA 18507

Attention: Mr. Jamie V
               Manager
               Memorial Camp

   Wilmar High School is planning a camp in Memorial Camp in the end of this year. We have made a plan about the activity of our camp, and I think Memorial Camp is good enough for us. It contain hiking, out bond,  campfire, and tracking. Our group, include the scout team are about  150 people. Could you send us some brochures so to help our planning?

1. How long is the route of hiking from the camp to the Moosic mountain?
2. Are there any good events near the end of the year? Except Christmas and New Year Eve.
3. What are good places that we can visit there? Could you give us some suggestions?
4. What are the suitable accommodations for kind group of us?

  As we are group of students, could we ask you a favour? If there is any other school that have a plan to camp in the near time of us, could you give us their contact so we could re-arrange the schedule and we could meet there at the camp. Camping together would be great!

  We would appreciate any information provided. Thanks for the time and assistance.

Sincerely,


Bhayu N


Bhayu N
That's all. Waiting for any suggestion :3 

4 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 23, 2016 at 9:46 AM

    in my opinoin, you'd better don't let the attention empty.

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  2. VirnaMarch 23, 2016 at 9:59 AM

    I think it'll be better if you write "are there any good events..."
    Your letter is really good. It's very neat and clear😁

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  3. UnknownMarch 23, 2016 at 11:12 AM

    Your letter really good, I think it so detail and you are good in choosing words.

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  4. UnknownMarch 23, 2016 at 10:10 PM

    Good writing ♡(∩o∩)♡

    But, I think champing together isn't really good idea. Remember that your team contain 150 persons. > just my opinion ≡^ˇ^≡

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